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Meet Eliza Renfield. Today’s her last day in Sunset Valley, so she’s in a rather foul mood. Don’t expect any smiles from her. Not even this picnic lunch stolen from a happy couple in the park could cheer her up.
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The trouble started when she met Thornton Wolff…
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…and perhaps became a little close to him that evening.
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Yeah, definitely too close.
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The snag? His wife, Morgana. She found out the next day and did not take the news quietly.
I’m not sure if she’s indicating a betrayal of trust in this picture or threatening to cut him into little pieces.
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Eliza tried in vain to persuade Thornton to leave Morgana.
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She then tried reasoning with Morgana. Well, what Eliza considers “reasoning,” at least.
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There may have been something from the police department about a “restraining order” or something. Whatever.
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Then her boss at the Outstanding Citizen Warehouse Corp. said something about blowing her cover, drawing too much attention from the authorities, and generally risking some of their more covert investments. A transfer was in order, effective immediately.
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Off to Riverview then, with strict orders to report to Ma Bagley and her crew for further instructions and a fresh start.
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Next: (02) Settling in… Fiendishly
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I really enjoy how you made the story flow from picture to picture. It felt very connected. Nice job!
Comment by pb1285n June 23, 2009 @ 7:21 amThanks!
Comment by mandy347 June 23, 2009 @ 6:40 pmLove the attitude, heh. Really fun read, looking forward to more!
Comment by arborfamilylegacy June 23, 2009 @ 7:08 pmI’m glad you enjoyed it!
Comment by mandy347 June 23, 2009 @ 10:02 pmJust starting this legacy after reading comments from others about how much they liked it. Can’t wait to read the rest. I liked how you set up the move from Sunset Valley to Riverview. That was clever.
Comment by Hrootbeer July 15, 2009 @ 6:34 pm